以下是引用无边落木在2007-5-24 20:12:00的发言：

As this song translated from Japanese, I would like to write a poem in english even we live in China.

Whisper,whisper

by the moon rise from silence river

floating

boat with smile of my lover

like my old dream

coming true on the near future

Tell me what I should do for you

tell me how can I care for you

if the sky so bright as your smile

if the love boat with song forever

I didn't know an English poem can be so graceful that make me drunk.Thanks for your creation.

以下是引用晓露轻盈在2007-5-24 23:59:00的发言：

I didn't know an English poem can be so graceful that make me drunk.Thanks for your creation.

Thanks for your kindness and encouragement.

以下是引用月华仙子在2007-5-24 23:54:00的发言：

Whisper,whisper

by the moon rise from silence river

月华初上。。。嘻嘻